h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

I really liked your entry, the whole metaphor is greatly accurate.

On the other hand, I would like to suggest one thing or two: You could add subheaders to subdivide your entry into specific parts, making it more easy to overview.

I also think you should reduce the amount of interrogative form you are using in general. Try replacing them with statements.

Oh, and I disagree about the unicity of losing sex virginity. An individual can indeed loose a lot of different sexual virginities. Various parts of my body can be considered virgin and will stay so, and I'm also a virgin in regard of a terrible lot of practices I'm not interested in. See the point?

Glad you liked it. I take the point about sexual virginity. A friend of mine once referred to "earning his brown wings".
I was quite upset that I knew what he meant.

Yeah. It doesn't need explanations.