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Peer Review: A1018243 - Travel Virgins

Post 1

Researcher 224465

Entry: Travel Virgins - A1018243
Author: Researcher 224465 - U224465

I'd like to put "Travel Virgins" into the Travel category in 'The Universe' please.
The idea came to me whilst standing on a street corner in Honolulu, suddenly wondering whether this was what I imagined standing on a street corner in Honolulu to be like.


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Post 2

McKay The Disorganised

Alas ~ this is not edited guide material, but it could be a belter for ASKH2G2.

I know exactly what you're talking about though, and if you really want this edited you could change the title to -say - Travel, Reality Vs Expectations, then list a few examples bung in some relevent platitudes - Tis better to travel than to arrive - travel broadens the mind etc.

I also recall when I lost my virginity - It was Christmas 1969 and I was on a ski-ing holiday in Austria. We went to Vienna for the day crossing over the River Danube. - It was a filthy muddy brown. smiley - sadface Not blue at all.


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Post 3

Trout Montague

This ain't quite right for PR is it?


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Post 4

There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho

It ain't at all. Could you please remove this from PR Researcher 224465? Click on this link PeerReview and locate your entry in the list (you will quite probably have to use the 'See more entries' button). Next to it you will see either a 'x' or the word 'Remove', depending on which skin you're using. Click on that link and the entry will be removed from this forum, but not deleted.

Once you've done that you might consider submitting it to Writing-Alternative. From there it could be taken up either by The Underguide or <./>ThePost</.>.

If you'd like to write something else for the Edited Guide, please read these two pages:

Writing-Beginners
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They'll give you a good grounding in what's expected of entries submitted to Peer Review.

smiley - geeksmiley - online2longsmiley - stiffdrinksmiley - hangoversmiley - ok


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Post 5

Zarquon's Singing Fish!

Hmm, this Researcher hasn't posted now in four weeks. Hope s/he comes back. The idea for this was fun and in the right place it could get to a wider audience.

Not Peer Review material, thoug.

Researcher - if you do come back and read this, have a look at Gosho's suggestions as to what you can do with this entry. Feel free to ask if you need help or support. smiley - smileysmiley - ok

smiley - fishsmiley - musicalnote


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Post 6

Mikey the Humming Mouse - A3938628 Learn More About the Edited Guide!

There seems to be a consensus here that the entry is not EG suitable -- should we move this thread back to the entry?

smiley - mouse


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Post 7

There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho

Yup


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