A Conversation for Video Games

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Sunsneezer

The information you give is good, but a little too subjective.

first, name your entry 'console video games' or 'Nintendo Video games' because the real content in your entry can be limited to that.

I liked the part about the milestones games of different nitendo systems. Maybe you should keep only that part, instead of covering the vast history of video games in general. Because (you said it yourself a couple of times in your entry) you don't know enough. So why include this instead of focusing on what you actually know?


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