A Conversation for Stuck in the Fast Lane
good characters...
ex-Rambling. Thingite. Dog. Pythonist. Deceased. Started conversation Dec 14, 2003
good voice and personality.
needs tightening. You kind of overwhelm the reader with too much info-
I'd shorten it and put in a plot.
You have the dialogue and characters down perfect.
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