A Conversation for Alcatraz, San Francisco, California, USA

Pending Entry: Little correction please

Post 1

Jeremy (trying to find his way back to dinner)

Hi,

I'm glad to see that this Entry is finally 'pending'. Sub-Ed Pastey said he can't make corrections anymore, and there is one little thing that needs to be corrected before it is published.

In the paragraph 'Alcatraz escape attempts' the second and third sentence are not correct. They should read:


36 of them tried to escape (two of them, Joe Cretzer and Sam Shockley, even twice) in 14 seperate escape attempts.'


As it stands now, the facts are not correct, it's not only a matter of style.

Please correct that if it's still possible, and feel free to remove this thread afterwards.

No patronizing intended!


Pending Entry: Little correction please

Post 2

Jeremy (trying to find his way back to dinner)

The mistake is still in the Entry.

Sorry for being somehow 'pushy'.

Jeremy


Pending Entry: Little correction please

Post 3

Ashley

Dealing with it now smiley - smiley


Key: Complain about this post

Pending Entry: Little correction please

Write an Entry

"The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy is a wholly remarkable book. It has been compiled and recompiled many times and under many different editorships. It contains contributions from countless numbers of travellers and researchers."

Write an entry
Read more