h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

First of all: Thanks Hypoman! I like your style very much. I'm proud of this work.

However there are some minor mistakes (at least one by myself). Unfortunately this article is typographically very demanding, I hope you are patient.

-- Do you think that the quote at the beginning is typeset better now? The Guidelines suggest the line break: http://www.h2g2.com/A340921

-- You inserted many dashs, which is nicer than before, however you used a mere '-' whereas I had used a . Please make it consistent! (Use my version...)

-- 264.5mm --> 264.5 mm (also for consistency).

-- Sometimes you wrote :- instead of :

-- 10-9 F = 0.000 000 001 F must be set 109 F = 0.000 000 001 F. Otherwise you can get a ridiculous line break here in IE.

-- 1024.1024 makes no sense of course, it should be 1024·1024

-- Prussia was the north-_eastern_ part of Germany (this was my fault).

Bye and thanks again.