h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

2nd para, 4th line: should read "...benefits TO local tourism" (and I think would read better as a footnote rather than in brackets!)

1st header: should read "The Story SO Far".

General: I get the impression that there has been a fair bit of re-writing of my original text, losing some of the finer points of the story. I also feel (and in accord with sub-editing guidelines) that bracketed items would make better footnotes. Just putting forward my point of view...

Love the picture by the way.

~A~

*BTW the original is at http://www.h2g2.com/A150139 if you want to refer back*

Thanks for this, should be better now

Thanks Ash.

Apologies John. Nit-picky mood, but feeling much better today.

~A~