A Conversation for William Henry 'Fatty' Foulke 1874 - 1916: English Footballer and Cricketer

Note to the sub

Post 1

Wand'rin star

The grammar of this sentence is ruined by the punctuation
"Like his name, he got - bigger and contemporary overweight footballers are still compared to 'Fatty' Foulke".
Drop the dash perhaps?
Note to author: I liked this, I can remember when goalkeepers were physical players rather than protected. They usually got the best of any encounter smiley - starsmiley - star


Note to the sub

Post 2

Zarquon's Singing Fish!

The addition of the hyphen there was added in response to a point made in the Peer Review stage. In retrospect, a second hyphen after the word 'bigger' would make this more elegant.

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