A Conversation for The Human Respiratory System
Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor Started conversation Sep 29, 2007
Thank you veyr much to all concerned, 2legs for writing it, Icy for subbing it, all the PR-ers who reviewed it for a year
I'm gonna find all the EGes which mention the lungs, etc. and post them at EF for the lovely Curators to add this to them (as soon as this Entry goes live)
Well done again
2legs - Hey, babe, take a walk on the wild side... Posted Sep 29, 2007
Was it only* the one year in PR this time? I must be getting more effecient : It was the first (potentially of several) entrys I've decided to do as a consequence of my noticing 'missing links' in other entrys; I.E., seeing a word in an entry and then in several others and being quite mystified why there isn't a suitable article for it to link to on such a common subject so... what shall I write on next? mucho tanks to everyone in the PR thread for beating me with sticks until I finally got a round tuit and finidshed the thing and of course for the subediting of the article... Though Of course I'm entirely oblivious to all my grammar and spelling mistakes which is why that is probably an ardious task in itself
Icy North Posted Oct 1, 2007
I agree it's a fine entry. It was no trouble whatsoever to subedit.
I reckon this would make a great A-level revision note.
2legs - Hey, babe, take a walk on the wild side... Posted Oct 1, 2007
Ooops the origion of the basis from which I wrote the article are discovered... it basically started as the A level notes I had on it, esp the headings, then I elaborated where appropiate from my Uni notes, and de-elaborated where there was too much stuff on certain bits, then I sailed the internet to check out everything seemed to be correct and plagerise a few handy phrases that summed things up more easily (plagerise perhaps a bit too strong, I used many differnt websites so that is called research ) actually maybe I oughta look through the rest of my level notes on this PC and see if any of them look good enough for an article and cover an area not already in the guide... plus all my Uni notes but they useually take too much effort to de-clutter from technical terminology and over-complicated things
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