A Conversation for Butterflies

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Post 1

KateBygrave

I don't think "a completely different <> of human has evolved just to study the magnificent butterfly" is quite accurate. Wouldn't it be better to smothing like "conversely scientifically minded people have devoted much time to study the magnificent butterfly; they are called lepidopterists.

I think it would be better to say that lepidopterist derives from the scientific classification of butterflies (and moths), Lepidoptera.


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Post 2

U168592

Thanks for the idea - the style was a subtle attempt at humour, ubt maybe it didn't work...smiley - erm


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Post 3

KateBygrave

Ahh humour! I had mine removed for logistical reasons. smiley - winkeye


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Post 4

U168592

I've been thinking about that myself, but then everytime I banged my elbow I wouldn't giggle...so...


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Post 5

KateBygrave

If banging your elbow makes you giggle; you have a serious overburden of humour. smiley - biggrin

Perhaps you should consider donating it to the needy? I know several people who could benefit from a humour transplant! smiley - laugh


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Post 6

U168592

ooo, don't know about that, wouldn't want my unnecessary humour being abused smiley - tongueout


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