A Conversation for Computers In Science Fiction - the Basics

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Post 1

Didactylos

Hate to be a pedant, but somebody has left THREE horrible errors in a single sentence, and something has to be said!

Your second paragraph reads:

“The purpose of this series of entries is to show the evolution of computers - whether stationary or semi-sentient artificial intelligences like androids and robots - have been portrayed, and how these portrayals have changed as our knowledge and perceptions of technology has grown.”

This should read:

“The purpose of this series of entries is to show HOW the evolution of computers - whether stationary or semi-sentient artificial intelligences like androids and robots - HAS been portrayed, and how these portrayals have changed as our knowledge and perceptions of technology HAVE grown.”

And this has been edited??! smiley - cross

D.


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Post 2

Kerr_Avon - hunting stray apostrophes and gutting poorly parsed sentences

You'll get a faster response for things like this if you post to A388334 - Editorial Feedback. I've posted a link to this there now, though. smiley - ok

smiley - ale


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Post 3

The H2G2 Editors


That has been fixed and we are checking the other entries for similar errors.

>>> And this has been edited??!

Yes it has but remember h2g2 is all about feedback like this which improves Guide Entries each step of the way.


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Post 4

Kerr_Avon - hunting stray apostrophes and gutting poorly parsed sentences

Exactly smiley - ok Pedants like us fulfil a vital role around here smiley - winkeye

smiley - ale


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Post 5

The H2G2 Editors

I think it's just the old addage of attracting more flies with honey than vinegar...

smiley - cheers


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Post 6

Kerr_Avon - hunting stray apostrophes and gutting poorly parsed sentences

What? How exactly does that apply in this circumstance? Or is it just too near the end of the day, and I'm confused...

smiley - ale


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Post 7

The H2G2 Editors


It's the tone of the feedback... but I suppose either way it was provided smiley - ok


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Post 8

Kerr_Avon - hunting stray apostrophes and gutting poorly parsed sentences

Ahh, I see what you mean now

smiley - ale


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Post 9

Baron Grim

smiley - bigeyes The eds seem to have missed that subtle hint you gave KerrAvon. Maybe this somewhat less subtle post will help ..FULFIL.. our desire for a typo to be corrected. smiley - winkeye

smiley - vampire Count Zero('s a LoONie)


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Post 10

Baron Grim

smiley - ermI hate it when I notice an error in one of my LoON posts. So I'll just try to kick a comma from this post into the first sentence of my last so that it will be clear that I was speaking TO KerrAvon and not ABOUT KerrAvon.

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smiley - vampire Count Zero('s a sloppy LoONie)


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Post 11

Kerr_Avon - hunting stray apostrophes and gutting poorly parsed sentences

smiley - laugh Without the errors in LoONie posts, other LoONies would have nothing to correct...

smiley - ale


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Post 12

Baron Grim

Yea, but this article still has the 'word' "fulfil" in it.


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Post 13

Kerr_Avon - hunting stray apostrophes and gutting poorly parsed sentences

So it does- I thought that was fixed smiley - doh

smiley - ale


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Post 14

The H2G2 Editors


As it should - 'fulfil' is the UK spelling of the word.

smiley - ok


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Post 15

Kerr_Avon - hunting stray apostrophes and gutting poorly parsed sentences

*checks dictionary* - so it is, well, you learn something every day smiley - laugh

smiley - ale


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Post 16

The H2G2 Editors


Welcome back to Earth smiley - oksmiley - winkeye


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Post 17

Kerr_Avon - hunting stray apostrophes and gutting poorly parsed sentences

Hey, it's been a long day at the end of a long week. In three quarters of an hour, I'll be finished here, and not back until Wednesday, so my concentration is not at its best smiley - winkeye

smiley - ale


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Post 18

Didactylos

My word, don’t things move fast around here?

Anyway, I’m just dropping in to say thanks to KerrAvon -- page duly noted.

And thanks to the h2g2 Editors from all right-thinking people! smiley - winkeye

U$ spellings can be a confusion. I’ve just realised that ‘honourable’ needs to be spelled this way -- I thought we dropped the ‘u’ the same as the Yanks! Just shows what constant exposure to $tateside models can do to you! smiley - erm

On the other hand, ‘humorous’ is spelled like this. Stupid language, always said so.


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