A Conversation for Computers In Science Fiction - the Basics
Grammar!
Didactylos Started conversation Sep 4, 2003
Hate to be a pedant, but somebody has left THREE horrible errors in a single sentence, and something has to be said!
Your second paragraph reads:
“The purpose of this series of entries is to show the evolution of computers - whether stationary or semi-sentient artificial intelligences like androids and robots - have been portrayed, and how these portrayals have changed as our knowledge and perceptions of technology has grown.”
This should read:
“The purpose of this series of entries is to show HOW the evolution of computers - whether stationary or semi-sentient artificial intelligences like androids and robots - HAS been portrayed, and how these portrayals have changed as our knowledge and perceptions of technology HAVE grown.”
And this has been edited??!
D.
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Kerr_Avon - hunting stray apostrophes and gutting poorly parsed sentences Posted Sep 4, 2003
You'll get a faster response for things like this if you post to A388334 - Editorial Feedback. I've posted a link to this there now, though.
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The H2G2 Editors Posted Sep 4, 2003
That has been fixed and we are checking the other entries for similar errors.
>>> And this has been edited??!
Yes it has but remember h2g2 is all about feedback like this which improves Guide Entries each step of the way.
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Kerr_Avon - hunting stray apostrophes and gutting poorly parsed sentences Posted Sep 4, 2003
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Kerr_Avon - hunting stray apostrophes and gutting poorly parsed sentences Posted Sep 4, 2003
What? How exactly does that apply in this circumstance? Or is it just too near the end of the day, and I'm confused...
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Kerr_Avon - hunting stray apostrophes and gutting poorly parsed sentences Posted Sep 4, 2003
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Baron Grim Posted Sep 4, 2003
The eds seem to have missed that subtle hint you gave KerrAvon. Maybe this somewhat less subtle post will help ..FULFIL.. our desire for a typo to be corrected.
Count Zero('s a LoONie)
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Baron Grim Posted Sep 4, 2003
I hate it when I notice an error in one of my LoON posts. So I'll just try to kick a comma from this post into the first sentence of my last so that it will be clear that I was speaking TO KerrAvon and not ABOUT KerrAvon.
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Count Zero('s a sloppy LoONie)
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Kerr_Avon - hunting stray apostrophes and gutting poorly parsed sentences Posted Sep 4, 2003
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Kerr_Avon - hunting stray apostrophes and gutting poorly parsed sentences Posted Sep 5, 2003
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Kerr_Avon - hunting stray apostrophes and gutting poorly parsed sentences Posted Sep 5, 2003
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Kerr_Avon - hunting stray apostrophes and gutting poorly parsed sentences Posted Sep 5, 2003
Hey, it's been a long day at the end of a long week. In three quarters of an hour, I'll be finished here, and not back until Wednesday, so my concentration is not at its best
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Didactylos Posted Sep 5, 2003
My word, don’t things move fast around here?
Anyway, I’m just dropping in to say thanks to KerrAvon -- page duly noted.
And thanks to the h2g2 Editors from all right-thinking people!
U$ spellings can be a confusion. I’ve just realised that ‘honourable’ needs to be spelled this way -- I thought we dropped the ‘u’ the same as the Yanks! Just shows what constant exposure to $tateside models can do to you!
On the other hand, ‘humorous’ is spelled like this. Stupid language, always said so.
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- 1: Didactylos (Sep 4, 2003)
- 2: Kerr_Avon - hunting stray apostrophes and gutting poorly parsed sentences (Sep 4, 2003)
- 3: The H2G2 Editors (Sep 4, 2003)
- 4: Kerr_Avon - hunting stray apostrophes and gutting poorly parsed sentences (Sep 4, 2003)
- 5: The H2G2 Editors (Sep 4, 2003)
- 6: Kerr_Avon - hunting stray apostrophes and gutting poorly parsed sentences (Sep 4, 2003)
- 7: The H2G2 Editors (Sep 4, 2003)
- 8: Kerr_Avon - hunting stray apostrophes and gutting poorly parsed sentences (Sep 4, 2003)
- 9: Baron Grim (Sep 4, 2003)
- 10: Baron Grim (Sep 4, 2003)
- 11: Kerr_Avon - hunting stray apostrophes and gutting poorly parsed sentences (Sep 4, 2003)
- 12: Baron Grim (Sep 5, 2003)
- 13: Kerr_Avon - hunting stray apostrophes and gutting poorly parsed sentences (Sep 5, 2003)
- 14: The H2G2 Editors (Sep 5, 2003)
- 15: Kerr_Avon - hunting stray apostrophes and gutting poorly parsed sentences (Sep 5, 2003)
- 16: The H2G2 Editors (Sep 5, 2003)
- 17: Kerr_Avon - hunting stray apostrophes and gutting poorly parsed sentences (Sep 5, 2003)
- 18: Didactylos (Sep 5, 2003)
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