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Subbing: John Muir
Magwitch - My name is Mags and I am funky. Started conversation Jun 11, 2014
Hi Elentari,
I'm your Sub Editor for John Muir: Conservationist. The new one is here: A87828754 don't forget to subscribe 
It's almost perfect 
Just a couple of things:
>>he went to university at the University of Wisconsin<<
to 
he went to the University of Wisconsin
>>He was therefore a major part in the<< creation of Yosemite
Would 'he became a major part' be better?
And I added a 'which' in here.
>>Muir's life is honoured in the John Muir Way *which* is a 134-mile long distance footpath in Scotland<<
That's all I could find but, I'll have another look (or several) over it again.
Mags
Subbing: John Muir
Magwitch - My name is Mags and I am funky. Posted Jun 20, 2014
Hi again,
I've made those changes listed above and as I find nothing else, nor any useful links, have returned it for the final polish.
Will look forward to seeing this one the Front Page.
Excellent work 
Mags
Subbing: John Muir
h2g2 Guide Editors Posted Jul 28, 2014
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