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You're subbing my entry on Cheers, the TV seriies. I thought I'd drop in and give a quick hello to open communications

Hi, Jodan,
I have gone through it and made small changes to make it read easier, but nothing serious or drastic. Certainly nothing that would change your voice. I think it was mostly commas in parenthetical expressions, and the like. I did take the liberty of adding one footnote. You also left out Cliff's real name when you introduced the character, so I added that as well.
I'm not sure if you can still access it in its edited form, but I have it as A1084619. Let me know if you cannot get hold of it.
Meanwhile, I must read it again to make sure I have not done something dumb anywhere, and then I can send it on.
Be happy in your work,
Nightowl

*intrudes on a perfectly sensible thread in order to be silly*

"Subbing Cheers"? It's never cheered me.

B

Sounds fine to me Nightowl

And Master B, behave!

Honestly - you're starting to sound like Abi.

B

So what? I like Abi

Well, somebody's got to.

*looks over shoulder in a 'if-she-reads-this-I'm-dead' sort of way...*

B