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Subbing Who Is that Novelist...

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Magwitch - Community Editor, Moderator, Sub Editor and Scout - Are you reading The Post every week?

Hehe, Boss, you've got me! smiley - winkeye

Don't laugh.

The new one is here A87786120 so don't forget to sub to it. smiley - ok

I've only had a quick read through and nothing glaring at me.

I'll give this some proper attention on Sunday.

Watch this space...


Subbing Who Is that Novelist...

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Dmitri Gheorgheni

smiley - rofl Who did you tick off to get stuck with this one? Or were you just the go-to Subeditor on 'Fanny Hill'? smiley - winkeye

smiley - ok Subscribed and waiting for questions. smiley - angel


Subbing Who Is that Novelist...

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Magwitch - Community Editor, Moderator, Sub Editor and Scout - Are you reading The Post every week?

Hi Boss,

I've read this now over four times, I only have one niggle and it might just be me, but...I don't like sentences beginning with 'And', there are two of them.

smiley - biroAnd everywhere else, probably

smiley - biroAnd they make the reader work,

As I say it might just be me...

Possible linky to:
A30334916 - Frankfurt am Main, Germany - Where Past Meets Present

Other than that I can't find any else.

I'll keep looking.


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Dmitri Gheorgheni

I like sentences that start with 'and', myself. I think that's an old English teacher tale. smiley - winkeye

I'd say, leave the first sentence alone.

Change the second sentence to 'They make the reader work.' You're right, that's stronger.

Good link, add it. smiley - smiley


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Magwitch - Community Editor, Moderator, Sub Editor and Scout - Are you reading The Post every week?

Link added.

Second sentence only has been changed smiley - winkeye.

I'll have another look in a wee while, see if I can find anything else.


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Dmitri Gheorgheni

smiley - ok


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Magwitch - Community Editor, Moderator, Sub Editor and Scout - Are you reading The Post every week?

Found a couple more linky dinks:

A3764621 - Email - an Introduction

A273566 - Vampires

Mags


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Post 8

Dmitri Gheorgheni

If you can work them in, go for it. smiley - smiley


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Magwitch - Community Editor, Moderator, Sub Editor and Scout - Are you reading The Post every week?

Worked in those other links, I don't think there's anything else I can add to it.

If you're happy with this, then I am also.

Mags


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Post 10

Dmitri Gheorgheni

smiley - ok Looks good to me, thanks!


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