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The Apprentice

I'm subbing this entry, so I'm dropping you a line.

http://www.bbc.co.uk/dna/h2g2/alabaster/A876846

The initial edit is done. Please comment if there is anything you find amiss or disagree with any adjustments.

Otherwise, I'll drop this back to the Editors before the end of the week.

Good entry!

The Apprentice
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Clovelly, Devon, UK

Post 2

Pheroneous

Thanks yours. I think I would remove the 'however' in paragraph 5, otherwise, a good job. Thanks again.


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