A Conversation for Andrew Carnegie: Steel, Money and Culture

Peer Review: A87844639 - Andrew Carnegie: Steel, Money and Culture

Post 1

Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor

Entry: Andrew Carnegie: Steel, Money and Culture - A87844639
Author: Dmitri Gheorgheni - U1590784

This entry was written because Bluebottle has so kindly assembled an entry on Carnegie libraries around the world, but we didn't have one that explained the old robbert baron...er, captain of industry...in his historical context.

Besides, I want to make everybody learn how to pronounce 'CarNEgie', not just the more savvy people in Pittsburgh and Scotland.smiley - winkeye

I haven't put in the internal links yet, so suggest any you like. And of course, we can link to BB's entry when both are edited.

smiley - dragon


A87844639 - Andrew Carnegie: Steel, Money and Culture

Post 2

Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor

Okay, I've put in a few internal links - feel free to suggest more. smiley - smiley

And a note to the Star Trek fans: yes, I am aware of certain similarities and differences between Andrew Carnegie and the Ferengi. Elektra and I have decided that he:

1. Had the lobes for business.
2. Could probably have written the Rules of Acquisition.
3. Might have been elected Grand Nagus.
4. Would have had a LOT to teach the Ferengi. After all, unlike them, he didn't think the word 'philanthropist' was an insult.
5. Would have been in trouble with The Divine Exchequer. smiley - winkeye


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Post 3

Bluebottle

Excellent entry - a wonderful accompaniment to the article on Carnegie Libraries I'm caretaking.

You asked for some suggested internal links - how about:
A87764520 Joe Magarac: Folklore Hero or Fakelore Satire?
A8379507 T-rd Blossoms and the American Dream
A87835116 The Freedom to Insult Politicians: Eugene V Debs and the Sedition Act
A22083068 The Natural History Museum, London, UK

(If you're wondering why the Natural History Museum, Carnegie was so impressed with his dinosaur that he had a copy made for the Natural History Museum, which is the original copy, and later had copies sent to Natural History Museums all around the world.)

I'd also emphasise that Carnegie was married and had a daughter. People might otherwise think that he gave away his fortune as he had no-one to leave it to, but no, he had a family who could have inherited. But where did Mr Andrew and Mrs Louise Carnegie, the world's wealthiest newlyweds, spend their honeymoon? Find out in his obituary here:
http://www.nytimes.com/learning/general/onthisday/bday/1125.html

<BB<


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Post 4

minorvogonpoet

This is an excellent entry, as always! smiley - smiley
One or two questions:

smiley - ermDid Carnegie learn to read and write in his native Scotland?

smiley - ermI wasn't sure if I understood the sentence about him learning to hear the telegraph messages

smiley - erm Could you say when he died please.


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Post 5

Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor

smiley - snork BB, I miss that Isle of Wight reference. How could I have done that?

Excellent suggestions all, both of you. I'll work those in. smiley - biggrin


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Post 6

Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor

smiley - puff Okay, you two!

I added;

All of BB's links (and one more).

A stealth reference to the Isle of Wight. smiley - winkeye

A paragraph explaining about Carnegie's family. It's obvious from his autobiography that he adored his wife and daughter, but didn't think he had to saddle them with the world's second-largest fortune.

Some changes to make it clear that Carnegie DID attend dame school in Dunfermline, his birth and death dates, and a bit more about the telegraph business. His ability to translate by ear was actually impressive, I gather.

I hope all this works. Let me know.

These two entries really show what we can all do when we put our heads together. smiley - biggrin Andrew might have been proud of us.


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Post 7

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

What a great entry and thanks for teaching me that Andrew Carnegie was Scottishsmiley - headhurtsthat nugget may come in handy next year smiley - winkeye

I'm a little disappointed there's no link to Quark, smiley - laughsmiley - rofl

No nitpicks to reportsmiley - ok

Thanks for writing this for the Guidesmiley - towel

GB
smiley - galaxysmiley - xmaspud


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Post 8

Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor

smiley - rofl I was tempted...smiley - run


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Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

smiley - applause

PR thread readsmiley - run

GB
smiley - galaxysmiley - cdouble


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