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A87871026 - 'Caprica' - the Television Series

Post 1

Bluebottle

Entry: 'Caprica' - the Television Series - A87871026
Author: Bluebottle - U43530

A look at a television series.

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A87871026 - 'Caprica' - the Television Series

Post 2

Gnomon - time to move on

There's seem to be a few typos in the names. You have Greystone and Graystone.

You say Yosef Adama adopts the name Joseph Adams but later reverts to his birthname. But in some places you have Joseph Adama, a combination of the two.

Getting names spelled correctly is one of the most important things you can do because it is very difficult for the sub-editor to do it without know the original material.


A87871026 - 'Caprica' - the Television Series

Post 3

Bluebottle

Good points, I've corrected 'Greystone' to 'Graystone' and hopefully Adama's name is clearer now.smiley - ta

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A87871026 - 'Caprica' - the Television Series

Post 4

SashaQ - happysad - Editor

I enjoyed this - not something I've seen, but the Entry gives a good overview smiley - ok

In the Sam Adama section, should the mention of Joseph's son etc be in a new paragraph?

Aha! I see there is mention of the Sarah Connor Chronicles in this Entry, so that's another place I saw it before reading your other Entry smiley - ok


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