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A640351 - Toothpaste

Post 1

frood

http://www.bbc.co.uk/guide/A640351


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Post 2

Witty Ditty

Try this:

http://www.bbc.co.uk/h2g2/guide/A640351

Stay smiley - cool,
WD


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Post 3

Ormondroyd

Nice idea for an Entry, frood, but I think there is quite a bit more that could be said on the subject. I tried doing a Yahoo! search on 'toothpaste', and at the top of the list of results was a document about the ingredients of toothpaste. I recommend that you take a look - there's certainly some information there that you could usefully include. smiley - peacedove


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Post 4

il viaggiatore

You need to explain things like flourine, and add more in general.


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Post 5

Jimi X

I agree that it needs *a lot* more depth.

Also, isn't it flouride?

This is a good start and it's a topic that deserves a place in the Edited Guide - I'm just not sure you're there yet.

smiley - cheers

- Jimi X


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Editorial Note: This conversation has been moved from 'Peer Review' to 'Peer Review Sin Bin'. Whoops! This thread was double-posted to PR. The *real* one is at http://www.bbc.co.uk/h2g2/guide/F48874?thread=144627


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Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese

Hey Frood, you've unsubscribed from the *wrong* thread! The other one lives at http://www.bbc.co.uk/h2g2/guide/F48874?thread=144627 and it has comments in it...


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Editorial Note: This conversation has been moved from 'Peer Review Sin Bin' to 'Toothpaste'.

Back to Entry - this topic is covered in more depth in Edited Entry A2818686 The History of Teeth Cleaning


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