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I'd be grateful if you would have a look at this entry, with the view of adding it to the edited guide. Any advice / criticism appreciated.

http://www.h2g2.com/A469055

Hi Steve,

This is interesting stuff, but I think it would benefit from a more basic introduction: who, what, where... Also, the last paragraph should be changed so that the idea is expressed in the third person.

JTG

Thanks, I've carried out some more work on it, and will carry on over the weekend. I'll let you know when I've polished it up a bit more.

OK, I've done the work on it, if you get a chance to have another look I would be grateful. Thanks for your time

Editorial Note: This conversation has been moved from 'Peer Review Sin Bin' to 'Special Constabulary'.

Back to Entry - this had potential, but there is an Edited Entry on the topic here: A662979 The Special Constabulary