h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Hi Gnomon, I'm the sub-ed for your article on Istanbul, the accepted version is A87827188 <--- don't forget to subscribe!

I've already applied your photos, would you like to check they're in the correct place, or would you prefer one to go at the start of your Entry?

Query: you have both "baptistry" and "Baptistery" - I'm not sure which is correct, or if they're something different from each other.



GB

Apparently both spellings are acceptable. Use 'baptistery'.

The pictures look great!

I've finished subbing, sorry it's taken so long, my RL is rather manic at the moment

If you'd like to check it through and OK I'll return it to the Eds for final polish

GB

Thanks, GB. Don't worry about taking a long time, it was a big entry.

There are just a few tiny changes I'd like:

If you use "between", you should use "and" to join the two things together, so:

between 1609 - 1616 --> between 1609 and 1616

between 1550-58 --> between 1550 and 1558

between 1597-1664 --> between 1597 and 1664

Since writing the entry I've discovered that it was during the reign of Theodosius the Second rather than the better known Theodosius I the Great that the walls were built, so:

In the time of Theodosius --> In the time of Theodosius II

Other than those, I'm happy with this.

Thanks Gnomon, I've fixed all those and returned to the Eds. See you on the Front Page!

GB