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Bluebottle Posted Mar 14, 2016
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Entry: Louis XIII Of France - A87842361
Author: bobstafford - U3151547
Looking good – hope you've not missed Gnomon's comment.
I've a couple of suggestions, if I may?
Henri 'became the King of Navarre, when in 1572 when his mother Jeanne d'Albret died. This meant as King of Catholic France' – I think that this bit needs clarifying as there's almost 2 decades between Henri becoming King of Navarre and King of France.
I'm not sure whether the 'The Children of Louis and Anne' section would work better after the 'Louis, Marie de Medici and Cardinal de Richelieu' section? It would put it into chronological order. There is a lot of duplication between the first paragraph of 'The Children' and the last paragraph of 'Louis, Marie de Medici and Cardinal de Richelieu'
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A87842361 - Louis XIII Of France rough
Bluebottle Posted Apr 11, 2016
Just a friendly nudge to remind you that some suggestions have been made since you last posted here.
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Bluebottle Posted May 4, 2016
The content is good, although I'd try to cut down on the number of footnotes by incorporating some of the information in the text. I think that one more sentence is needed – one that explains how Henri inherited the French throne as it jumps from him being a Protestant King of Navarre to King of Catholic France.
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Gnomon - time to move on Posted May 6, 2016
Well done, Bob.
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