h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Entry: 'The Terminator' - the Film - A87863809
Author: Bluebottle - U43530

Anyone seen this film?

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Yes

Hi Bluebottle.

Some nitpicks:

Consider rewording many of the occurrences of "James Cameron" to be just "Cameron".

longer, director's cut -- remove the comma

She works in burger restaurant -->
She works in a burger restaurant

and having stranger hair -- I'm not sure if you mean the moped or Connor has the strange hair! And if it is Connor, then what is the hair stranger than?

This would become his first film he fully directed. -->
This would become the first film he fully directed.

when making his film -->
when making films

Thanks for the thorough read-through – I was beginning to think I was the only person who'd ever heard of this little film... Changes have been made in line with your suggestions - they were all straight-forward

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No mention of the iconic customised 750/4...most think Arnie's first seen on a Harley...just that really ugly Honda Spacy? One of my fave films thanks bb

I've mentioned that in a footnote now

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To write about 'Terminator 2: Judgement Day' somewhen…

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Congratulations!

Excellent read good work