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the_jon_m - bluesman of the parish Started conversation Apr 26, 2012
Entry: Railways between Liverpool and Manchester - A87755656
Author: the_jon_m - bluesman of the parish - U204330
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A87755656 - Railways between Liverpool and Manchester
Z Posted Apr 26, 2012
Excellent entry
I haven't had time to read through it all, but it's one of my favourite topics and I'll be sure to be back.
A87755656 - Railways between Liverpool and Manchester
Bluebottle Posted Apr 26, 2012
Excellent – the sort of thing I wish I'd written.
There were a few minor spelling things I noticed (they always seem to slip in, as I know too well)
'parliament' should be 'Parliament'
'who were recruited Charles Vignoles' to be 'who recruited'
origins in roman times – should be Roman
'this line became secondary, with less services' – should be fewer services
I would also consider linking to related articles, such as:
A9565329 National Rail Stations in Central Manchester (I wonder who wrote that, eh?)
A280892 Liverpool, Merseyside, UK
A309674 Manchester, England, UK
A500365 Wigan, Greater Manchester, UK
A13064780 The Liverpool Overhead Railway
But otherwise excellent!
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A87755656 - Railways between Liverpool and Manchester
h2g2 Guide Editors Posted May 18, 2012
This is a great Entry,
Any more comments? or is this ready to wing off to the next stage?
A87755656 - Railways between Liverpool and Manchester
hygienicdispenser Posted May 23, 2012
Very interesting. I've lived in this area for some years, so I know all the places mentioned. Just one thing...
"The Rennies made demands for their services that the company were not willing to pay, so they went back to Stephenson. He didn’t appreciate the work of the gentile Rennies so changed the route"
I was wondering why the word "gentile" appeared in there? I can't make any sense of it.
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