Subject: A901315 - FRAGMENTED (part V) Posted Dec 16, 2002 by [...]		Post: 1

Entry: FRAGMENTED (part V) - A901315
Author: The Discworld's Pythonist - U198644


THERE WE GO...

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Subject: A901315 - FRAGMENTED (part V) Posted Feb 7, 2003 by a girl called Ben This is a reply to this Posting.		Post: 2

Hi Diskworld's Pythonist!

Thanks for putting this into AWW - I enjoyed reading it, and the other entries in the series.

(In order they are:
A815384
A817526
A820658
A876233 and
A901315 (this one)).

I rather like these - you have a deft way with puns, and I like puns.

What do you want to get from AWW?

I assume that you know that because these are fiction (or so I devoutly hope!) they are not suitable for the Edited Guide.

If you want some detailed commentary, I am happy to make a few remarks about each of them.

My overall feeling is that you have a way with words, a nice eye and a sense of humour, but that these are rather unpolished. Some of the sentances are awkward. You may find that reading a piece of writing out loud helps you identify which sentances work and which ones are more clunky.

I was also uncertain whether or not I was reading a single story in 5 parts, or 5 separate stories. I assume it is one story, but I found the breaks between some of them quite substantial.

Anyway - for writing them and for posting them here. As I said, I enjoyed reading them, they kept my attention (most of the time , and you can turn a pun. I will do outragious things for a good pun.

And keep on writing - the more you write the better you will get.

Ben

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Subject: A901315 - FRAGMENTED (part V) Posted Feb 7, 2003 by a girl called Ben This is a reply to this Posting.		Post: 3

Damn! I *do* know how to spell 'Discworld' - I just keep forgetting!

B

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Subject: A901315 - FRAGMENTED (part V) Posted Apr 14, 2003 by [...] This is a reply to this Posting.		Post: 4

Err am I getting complements or citique here?? <hah> !

Just wondering.. what could I get for this in AWW?

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