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Hi Pastey, I've been given your Entry A87726937 Port Street Beer House to sub-edit, so please pop over there and subscribe.
I've made some minor changes and added a few internal links to other Approved Guide Entries. I hope you'll agree, but obviously if you have any problems with what I've done you can let me know via this conversation.
Get back to me when you're happy and I'll press the button to return this Entry to the Eds and thereafter to the FP.
h5ringer
Just fixing the conversation title
It all looks good to me, thank you
There is a photo for it, not sure if it's gone into the image library yet though...
Excellent, I'll leave a note for the Eds when I return it that there's a photo available
I'm having trouble with this sentence: <<Following the love of something different in cask, this pub aims to provide something unusual, yet very good on keg too.>>
I'm fairly certain I get your meaning, but the phrasing seems a bit of a square peg in a round hole (I think Gnomon said something similar in the PR thread).
Could we try something like <<As well as being creative in their selection of cask ales, this pub treats quality keg beer with equal respect.>> An alternative choice of words by yourself would of course be great.
Nudge nudge
Sorry, totally forgot
I trust the Subs judgement
Right it's on its way to the FP. As a real fan, I enjoyed this Entry a great deal
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