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This is the Conversation Forum for Alternative Writing Workshop << A13812536 - Money, Medicine and the Masses A17301926 - A Dream [provisional title] >> Subject: A13698660 - You Are My Bicycle Posted Aug 12, 2006 by minorvogonpoet   Posting 1 Entry: You Are My Bicycle - A13698660 Author: minorVogonpoet - U3099090 Definitely fiction. Read the First Reply to this Posting Subject: A13698660 - You Are My Bicycle Posted Aug 12, 2006 by LL Waz This is a reply to this Posting   Posting 2 Oh, neat stuff. I definitely like this. Thanks for posting it - it raised a smile and gave something to think about on a Saturday afternoon time-out. Waz Read the First Reply to this Posting Subject: A13698660 - You Are My Bicycle Posted Aug 12, 2006 by Pinniped This is a reply to this Posting   Posting 3 Fine idea; good realisation too. Thanks for posting it Read the First Reply to this Posting Subject: A13698660 - You Are My Bicycle Posted Aug 12, 2006 by Trin Tragula This is a reply to this Posting   Posting 4 This is lovely A real charm to it - not twee, not 'cute', genuine charm Read the First Reply to this Posting Subject: A13698660 - You Are My Bicycle Posted Aug 13, 2006 by minorvogonpoet This is a reply to this Posting   Posting 5 Thanks for your kind comments. Perhaps I should write more poems of this type. Read the First Reply to this Posting Subject: A13698660 - You Are My Bicycle Posted Aug 13, 2006 by rose-quartz This is a reply to this Posting   Posting 6 This is very good !! I loved the wry humour in the poem, and the last line was brilliant. I really enjoyed this poem. Thankyou minorVogonpoet. Best wishes Rose xx Read the First Reply to this Posting Subject: A13698660 - You Are My Bicycle Posted Aug 14, 2006 by U1250369 This is a reply to this Posting   Posting 7 I love your poem, especially the neat ending. Thank you. Read the First Reply to this Posting Subject: A13698660 - You Are My Bicycle Posted Aug 14, 2006 by minorvogonpoet This is a reply to this Posting   Posting 8 Many thanks. Read the First Reply to this Posting Subject: A13698660 - You Are My Bicycle Posted Aug 17, 2006 by Trout Montague This is a reply to this Posting   Posting 9 Yeah, it's good. I like the metaphor of the sexual machine. And the gender flip ... usually women are rides and men toss them. Read the First Reply to this Posting Subject: A13698660 - You Are My Bicycle Posted Aug 19, 2006 by minorvogonpoet This is a reply to this Posting   Posting 10 Thank you. It's nice to contemplate a bit of feminist rebellion... Read the First Reply to this Posting Subject: A13698660 - You Are My Bicycle Posted Aug 20, 2006 by wilddazzlinglucinda This is a reply to this Posting   Posting 11 Contemplate feminine rebellion now there's a concept.... Read the First Reply to this Posting Subject: A13698660 - You Are My Bicycle Posted Aug 20, 2006 by minorvogonpoet This is a reply to this Posting   Posting 12 Well, how many of us actually rebel? How many of us start out thinking we're going to get equal opportunities in terms of jobs etc, but end up doing the housework as well as earning our keep? Read the First Reply to this Posting Subject: A13698660 - You Are My Bicycle Posted Aug 20, 2006 by U1250369 This is a reply to this Posting   Posting 13 Interesting point.......but more than interesting, why is your PS being moderated. Do you mind that I ask ? Read the First Reply to this Posting Subject: A13698660 - You Are My Bicycle Posted Aug 21, 2006 by wilddazzlinglucinda This is a reply to this Posting   Posting 14 Hello vogon poet, my comment was tongue in cheek, I did rebel, divorce is often a radical statement declaring war on errant husbands. In the workplace I am not skilled to judge , because I started my own business after divorce, but there I would say the toughness of life is measured out equally. I do have sympathy with the housework issue though. Women do seem to have the raw end of the deal here. I have two sons and in spite of insistent training, they will stand back and let me do the work. Read the First Reply to this Posting Subject: A13698660 - You Are My Bicycle Posted Aug 21, 2006 by minorvogonpoet This is a reply to this Posting   Posting 15 I have no idea. Subject: A13698660 - You Are My Bicycle Posted Aug 21, 2006 by minorvogonpoet This is a reply to this Posting   Posting 16 Hello dazzlinglucinda. At the moment, I'm concentrating on writing better stories and developing a livelier style of poetry. I never succeeded in training my son! Read the First Reply to this Posting Subject: A13698660 - You Are My Bicycle Posted Oct 16, 2006 by UnderGuide Editors This is a reply to this Posting   Posting 17 There's on offer, but best not while in charge of a bicycle perhaps. Congratulations on both 'Anniversary present' and 'You Are My Bicycle' being picked out by the Underguide Miners to go into underguide. And well deserved, too. Both really neat ideas you've followed through. An UnderGuide Polisher will contact you about any final polishing before creating a UG copy of the entry to be featured on h2g2's Front Page some week in the next couple of months. Cheers and thanks, UGeds Read the First Reply to this Posting Subject: A13698660 - You Are My Bicycle Posted Oct 17, 2006 by minorvogonpoet This is a reply to this Posting   Posting 18 Many thanks for selecting my poems. I've just realised that I left the last line off this one! Read the First Reply to this Posting Subject: A13698660 - You Are My Bicycle Posted Oct 17, 2006 by Trin Tragula This is a reply to this Posting   Posting 19 Really? Was that line not there before? Read the First Reply to this Posting Subject: A13698660 - You Are My Bicycle Posted Oct 18, 2006 by minorvogonpoet This is a reply to this Posting   Posting 20 It should have been. It was part of the original poem. Read the First Reply to this Posting Guide Entry List Guide Entry List

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