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This is the Conversation Forum for Star Fleet - Television Series << Star fleet/X bomber Yeah! >> Subject: Peer Review: A769377 - Star Fleet - Television Series Posted Jun 17, 2002 by Excelsior   Posting 1 Entry: Star Fleet - Television Series - A769377 Author: Excelsior - U196555 This is my first attempt at an article, so please be gentle! However, it is on a subject close to my heart and as you'll see I've kept it relatively short given the volume of material on my web site. There is an un-edited guide entry on this series already, but I think mine's a little more structured and the other one seems to have been abandoned, so... Read the First Reply to this Posting Subject: A769377 - Star Fleet - Television Series Posted Jun 17, 2002 by Spiff This is a reply to this Posting   Posting 2 hiya Excelsior, Heavens! No, seriously, this looks great! I remember the series vaguely but couldn't have placed it at all. Ta. proper read and comments later... seeya spiff Read the First Reply to this Posting Subject: A769377 - Star Fleet - Television Series Posted Jun 18, 2002 by xyroth This is a reply to this Posting   Posting 3 well written, and as comprehensive as the stargate sg-1 entry that went through peer review recently. I have no doubt that this will be picked as soon as a scout happens to see it. Read the First Reply to this Posting Subject: A769377 - Star Fleet - Television Series Posted Jun 18, 2002 by Excelsior This is a reply to this Posting   Posting 4 Thanks - this is all very encouraging! I could go into much greater depth in the article, but I feel that without images there's only so far you can go with a description of a TV series. I was conscious that this might not be quite in line with h2g2's edited guide philosohpy, but hopefully the cross-linking and so on make it quite a valid entry. In a sense my aim is not so much to inform as to remind, and then my site's there if someone wants to take it further... Read the First Reply to this Posting Subject: A769377 - Star Fleet - Television Series Posted Jun 18, 2002 by Researcher 177704 This is a reply to this Posting   Posting 5 In the entry you have placed the show's theme tune and lyrics at the end, under the 'intrigued' header. Maybe it's just me, but this information seems a little out of place at the end of the article. Perhaps it would be better if you added a new subheader after 'The Spaceships' called 'The Star Fleet Theme Tune' or something like that. If you did this, then i think the 'Intrigued?' section would provide a much better conclusion to the entry. Apart from that little nitpick, a great entry! Read the First Reply to this Posting Subject: A769377 - Star Fleet - Television Series Posted Jun 18, 2002 by Excelsior This is a reply to this Posting   Posting 6 That's a good idea - and it would actually make it even closer to my approach in the main overview section of my site. I'll do some editing... Read the First Reply to this Posting Subject: A769377 - Star Fleet - Television Series Posted Jun 20, 2002 by Excelsior This is a reply to this Posting   Posting 7 Editing's done - and I thought I'd add a little disclaimer in at the top, because it's very common for people to be looking for an entirely different Star Fleet when they search on those words! Read the First Reply to this Posting Subject: A769377 - Star Fleet - Television Series Posted Jul 5, 2002 by Excelsior This is a reply to this Posting   Posting 8 Urm, could someone at moderator-y sort of level tell me if anything else needs doing to my entry? Or should I assume it's OK until I hear otherwise and wait for a scout to (hopefully) pick it up? Read the First Reply to this Posting Subject: A769377 - Star Fleet - Television Series Posted Jul 7, 2002 by Primord This is a reply to this Posting   Posting 9 a brilliant entry-can't wait to see it in the edited guide-the show always generates a lot of interest! Read the First Reply to this Posting Subject: A769377 - Star Fleet - Television Series Posted Jul 7, 2002 by Zarquon's Singing Fish! This is a reply to this Posting   Posting 10 Yes a good entry. For a first entry - a great entry! Definitely Edited Guide material. I've only one small comment on content. You mention a strategy of weapon called a/the 'Death ball' and then don't tell use what it is. I for one would like to know a bit more (maybe a footnote?). Read the First Reply to this Posting Subject: A769377 - Star Fleet - Television Series Posted Jul 7, 2002 by Excelsior This is a reply to this Posting   Posting 11 Ah, a Scout! Yes, I can certainly add in a bit more detail on what the Death Ball was. It was, um, a sort of ball shaped tank that set out to destroy stuff. I know, sounds a bit Austin Powersy, but...! I'll do the edit now... Read the First Reply to this Posting Subject: A769377 - Star Fleet - Television Series Posted Jul 7, 2002 by Researcher 177704 This is a reply to this Posting   Posting 12 My first entry went into Peer Review today, Excelsior; i'm a few weeks behind you in the race for the Edited Guide . I don't suppose you'd mind reading it and then telling me where i could improve, would you? Read the First Reply to this Posting Subject: A769377 - Star Fleet - Television Series Posted Jul 7, 2002 by Excelsior This is a reply to this Posting   Posting 13 Well I can try, although I don't know that I qualify to rate other people's stuff other than in an English language sort of way - can you point me in the right direction, I'm not sure which entry you're referring to? Read the First Reply to this Posting Subject: A769377 - Star Fleet - Television Series Posted Jul 8, 2002 by Researcher 177704 This is a reply to this Posting   Posting 14 Oop, sorry - A781102 Read the First Reply to this Posting Subject: Congratulations - Your Entry has been Picked for the Edited Guide! Posted Jul 11, 2002 by h2g2 auto-messages This is a reply to this Posting   Posting 15 Your Guide Entry has just been picked from Peer Review by one of our Scouts, and is now heading off into the Editorial Process, which ends with publication in the Edited Guide. We've therefore moved this Review Conversation out of Peer Review and to the entry itself. If you'd like to know what happens now, check out the page on 'What Happens after your Entry has been Recommended?' at EditedGuide-Process. We hope this explains everything. Thanks for contributing to the Edited Guide! Read the First Reply to this Posting Subject: Congratulations - Your Entry has been Picked for the Edited Guide! Posted Jul 11, 2002 by Excelsior This is a reply to this Posting   Posting 16 Woo hoo! Read the First Reply to this Posting Subject: Congratulations - Your Entry has been Picked for the Edited Guide! Posted Jul 11, 2002 by Researcher 177704 This is a reply to this Posting   Posting 17 Congratulations Conversation list Conversation list

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