|Subject: A44646023 - Xmas Glurge, Please Forward|
Posted Dec 9, 2008 by minorvogonpoet
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|Yes, you've hit the nail on the head about Xmas glurge. I have a hatred of the tinned muzak they broadcast in shops |
and the adverts that try to convince you that the best way to someone's heart is by buying them the dearest brandy, perfume, jewellery...
Stylistically speaking, your syntax goes to pieces here and there in this essay. I get the impression that you dashed it off in a hurry.
Incidentally, I didn't know that stories needed a statement of intent. I thought they were, well, just stories.