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This is the Message Centre for steve-paul ---- no lyrics!!<wah> << Update Whooopi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! >> Subject: William Dampier Entry Posted Oct 19, 2006 by Wyatt   Posting 1 A15883374 Hi, steve-paul, I've Sub-edited your Entry, so have a look and make sure everything is alright. Read the First Reply to this Posting Subject: William Dampier Entry Posted Oct 20, 2006 by steve-paul ---- no lyrics!!<wah> This is a reply to this Posting   Posting 2 Hi, thanks there is just a few things [that are my fault] that are real nitpicks: (first paragraph) ---> "was THE first man to circumnavigate", (first paragraph) ---> I don't think the 'and' needs to be there before "going on to do it a third time." (first paragraph..again ): ---> maybe a semicolan after "lived in" instead of ",and". (third paragraph) ---> maybe no comma after "parents had died" (third paragraph) ---> i think deckhand is one word (eleventh paragraph ('Travels to Australia')) ---> <However, they did not stay long because they needed water and provisions. So they> ---> i think that should be one sentence thanks again Read the First Reply to this Posting Subject: William Dampier Entry Posted Oct 20, 2006 by Wyatt This is a reply to this Posting   Posting 3 Sorry for what I missed or messed up. I think I would leave that 'and' in there, though. It makes more sense to me to leave it. Read the First Reply to this Posting Subject: William Dampier Entry Posted Oct 20, 2006 by steve-paul ---- no lyrics!!<wah> This is a reply to this Posting   Posting 4 no, you didn't mess up anything , thanks, it's looking good . I'm going to be away for a few days so if i don't reply to anything after tonight don't think i'm being rude . Read the First Reply to this Posting Subject: William Dampier Entry Posted Oct 20, 2006 by Wyatt This is a reply to this Posting   Posting 5 Is it good to go, then? Read the First Reply to this Posting Subject: William Dampier Entry Posted Oct 20, 2006 by steve-paul ---- no lyrics!!<wah> This is a reply to this Posting   Posting 6 Certinelly Conversation list Conversation list

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