 |  |  | Subject: I need A sub- Ed please Posted Aug 2, 2007 by SchrEck Inc. This is a reply to this Posting
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  |  | Hi Bob, it's only the main entry that I seriously worked on - the others simply got the link bar at the top. A question from the first entry A22550753, section 'notes on other territories' - I don't know wht to do with this sentence:
The kingdom was related by marriage to the kingdom of Wessex Elesadotter of Wessex and King Wihtgar of the Isle of Wight in 469 AD.
Were they married in 469? If yes, I'd change it to:
The kingdom was related to the kingdom of Wessex by marriage of Elesadotter of Wessex and King Wihtgar of the Isle of Wight in 469 AD.
Hope that's OK...
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