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This is the Conversation Forum for A seasonal haiku challenge. << violet The Haiku Challenge Thread >> Subject: a springy thing Posted Apr 5, 2012 by SiliconDioxide   Posting 1 winter's last frost bites; crystal teeth ring breaking buds welcomed in bright sun. Read the First Reply to this Posting Subject: a springy thing Posted Apr 16, 2012 by Solnushka (Foundation) This is a reply to this Posting   Posting 2 Nicely done. I like 'frost bites' as a verb phrase rather than the noun. Clever! I can see that I need to pack more into my haikus. That's wonderfully rich all round. Read the First Reply to this Posting Subject: a springy thing Posted Apr 17, 2012 by SiliconDioxide This is a reply to this Posting   Posting 3 Thanks for the feedback, especially since it is positive! It is entirely possible to write doggerel in 5-7-5 form, but I try to not. Here's an autumn entry from my journal in Nov 2009: Green summer has passed. Yellow and orange mark the path, winter is coming. Read the First Reply to this Posting Subject: a springy thing Posted Apr 17, 2012 by SiliconDioxide This is a reply to this Posting   Posting 4 And just for fun, I rewrote your haiku: Advancing sunrise, Slanting light through window panes. Wakens baby's cry. Sorry about that Conversation list Conversation list

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